Small suggestion for the text:

Under no circumstances will Subscriber use the Network or the Service to [...] person, or (d) knowingly post any false, inaccurate or incomplete material, or (e) copy, download, or scrape any Personal Profile Content for the purpose of [...]

Emphasis mine and also left out two pieces denoted by [...].

I suggest to remove the emphasized or. Between (a), (b) and (c) there are only commas. The word or is absent there. Therefore it is inconsistent to have this between part (c) and (d), because now part (e) was added. (In the current ToS, this part is present, just without part (e))

By the way, I think that this is a very important change, even though I have never had any such emails.

Small suggestion for the text:

Under no circumstances will Subscriber use the Network or the Service to [...] person, or (d) knowingly post any false, inaccurate or incomplete material, or (e) copy, download, or scrape any Personal Profile Content for the purpose of [...]

Emphasis mine and also left out two pieces denoted by [...].

I suggest to remove the emphasized or. Between (a), (b) and (c) there are only commas. The word or is absent there. Therefore it is inconsistent to have this between part (c) and (d), because now part (e) was added. (In the current ToS, this part is present, just without part (e))

Disclaimer: I am not a lawyer and this is not legal advice, nor has it ever been legal advice.

However, I think that this update is a very good idea, even though I have never had any such emails. I've seen several meta posts complaining about emails.