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There are 12 preceding months so the plural "months" should be used. Is this correct? But the chart uses the singular "month" so maybe the singular is correct?

The line graph gives information about price changes of three metals in each month of 2014, compared to the preceding months.

The line graph gives information about price changes of three metals in each month of 2014, compared to the preceding month.

I wrote these two sentences.

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  • The graph compares price changes of three metals over Jan-Dec 2014. Advice: the less wordiness the better. Just shoot for: subject, verb, object. Commented Sep 15 at 15:38
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    Each month has only one preceding month, so you would naturally use the singular for that percentage change. Commented Sep 15 at 15:38
  • There are three years shown, January to December, so the word preceding is not needed at all. Commented Sep 15 at 15:40
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    @Lambie there are not three years shown, there are three minerals shown (Copper, Nickel, and Zinc) for the same year (2014). The second sentence is the correct one. Commented Sep 15 at 19:12
  • @Hefe Yes, I meant three metals. Thanks. :) The second sentence does not sound like regular economics writing. This would: The graph plots price changes per month for three metals in 2014. That's my second go. Commented Sep 15 at 22:02

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The confusion is just over what data is being graphed. The Y axis is labeled "Percent change in price compared with previous month." The value is not a price, it's a change in price. In January, nickel didn't cost "6"; it cost six percent more than it did in December.

As for the proposed sentence, perhaps the best version is simply "The line graph gives information about price changes of three metals in each month of 2014." That's true on its own, and is to-the-point; the "... compared to the preceding month[s]" phrase isn't really necessary.

Note: 1) Yes, it's true that there are many "previous months." But if we say "the previous month," it means the (single) immediately-previous one. And 2) the "the" is left out here because the label uses "headlinese."

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  • The chart is entitled: Average monthly change in prices. The word previous or preceding is simply not needed. It compares price changes over the year. Commented Sep 15 at 18:42
  • @Lambie That's the title of the chart, as opposed to the label of the Y axis. No question that both could be improved, but the OP's confusion is because the Y values only concern a single month, the one immediately preceding the X value. That is, the chart shows "months," but each data point shows a single "month," and its relationship to the previous one. Commented Sep 15 at 20:20
  • @Lambie I answered hastily before realizing the OP was more focused on summarizing the chart than on understanding the Y-axis label. I edited to add a bit about that; IMO they don't need anything more than "the graph tells you about changes," the end! I think "preceding" (and "previous") could be useful here, but the problems come from the first half of the proposed sentence; e.g., if the summary is going to directly reference how the Y-axis works, perhaps it needs "change," not "changes." Maybe something like... Commented Sep 15 at 22:18
  • ... "The line graph tracks the change in price, compared to the preceding month, of three metals over 2014." Commented Sep 15 at 22:18
  • @Lambie Sorry, I'm not sure what part of the article you're thinking of? I mean, I do know how line charts work. Commented Sep 15 at 22:41
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Each month is only being compared to one other month, the one immediately preceding it. We use the singular to refer to that one corresponding month.

As another example of one-to-one correspondences like this, suppose a bunch of people are standing in a line. You might say to them

Say "hello" to the person to the right of you.

Even though multiple people will be greeted, each person only greets one person.

On the other hand, you would say

Say "hello" to the people next to you.

if you want each person to greet the person on their right and also the person on their left, since they're each greeting multiple people.

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  • The text in the question says "compared to the preceding month." Commented Sep 15 at 23:20
  • And a "monthly change" is a change as compared to the previous month. Commented Sep 15 at 23:20
  • The caption on the Y axis is "change in price compared with previous month". That's the use that they're asking about. Why don't you see that? Commented Sep 16 at 14:36
  • It's not showing prices, it's showing the month-to-month percentage differences. E.g. Nickel's price dropped by 3% from May to June, then dropped by 1% from June to July. Commented Sep 16 at 14:44

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